We all got to see the snow in the weekend. This is a photo of the snow on the ranges, outside our classroom window!
In the weekend my brother was so excited because in 8 years it hasn't snowed. After school I am going to the ranges. It might be closed.
By Mitchell
In the weekend I heard thunder and hail. When I heard the thunder I curled up in a ball. I saw snow on the mountain and when I was walking to school I saw ice! Snow is fun.
By Catherine.
6 comments:
I liked your story because I liked the part where you curled up into a ball.
I liked the part where you said thunder because it is an exciting word.
I liked the part when you said he hasn't seen the snow in 8 years.
good writing about the snow!
By Room 11
wal in 8 years that is a long tem for it to snow
Good writing. By Cyan
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